Whitestar16

Hello again everyone! It's been about a month since I last had any activity. I've had a busy summer. However, I am back and better than ever with a new chapter to my book, and my longest chapter yet! I also have a question for anyone who actually reads this stuff: what is my story about? Not my plot. My story. In other words, what is the deeper, more thoughtful portion of my book that you get? For example, LOTR's plot is (in its essence) about destroying the One Ring, but its story is about resisting the ring's power. What do you guys think my book's story is? Please let me know. I'm curious to see what people are picking up on.

Whitestar16

Hello again everyone! It's been about a month since I last had any activity. I've had a busy summer. However, I am back and better than ever with a new chapter to my book, and my longest chapter yet! I also have a question for anyone who actually reads this stuff: what is my story about? Not my plot. My story. In other words, what is the deeper, more thoughtful portion of my book that you get? For example, LOTR's plot is (in its essence) about destroying the One Ring, but its story is about resisting the ring's power. What do you guys think my book's story is? Please let me know. I'm curious to see what people are picking up on.

Whitestar16

Hello Wattpad community! I'm back! I know it's been a while. I had some bad writer's block and then I was too busy to really type for than a sentence or two. Sorry it took so long to publish anything. But two more chapters to Varis Galanodel, with more on the way! Hooray! 
          
          That's all for now. Hope you're all enjoying your summer!

Star_Wars_Teller

@Whitestar16 Hi, i need to start working on my book too. Lol
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Whitestar16

Happy Mother's Day, mothers! You're all great, and literally no one using this site would exist without you! Thanks for everything you do for us and for not eating us when we were young and vulnerable. Hopefully you don't regret that decision.

Whitestar16

Well...I'm back. No new chapters for Varis Galanodel yet though, sorry. Working on it. I have, however, begun uploading the final book to my awful Pyrus series. It currently lacks a cover, but I do plan to fix that...eventually. Anyway, that's all I really wanted to say. Bye!

Whitestar16

I would like to apologize for my lack of uploading. April has been crazy busy for me and with everything I've had going on, I haven't found the time to write much more than a couple sentences. But never fear, more is on the way. It might just take some time. Bear with me here.
          
          Also, I've done a lot more thinking about the geography of Triliad and actually made a crappy map of sorts, so expect some changes in travel time popping up here and there. 

Whitestar16

Hello! It's been a little while. Another chapter is online and I made a small change to Part 2. All I did was add the names of two cities that come into play in the chapter I'm currently writing. The cities are Hillhaven (a High Elf city in the far south, by Sunglow Lake) and Kilmoth (a dwarf city in the Golden Mountains).

Whitestar16

Quick little update here, you may get a notification saying I did something to my story, all it was was getting rid of the unicorns that help Varis. I was reading my D&D books (don't judge me) and it turns out that unicorns are much like druids in the sense that they are forest lords/protectors. The unicorn wouldn't answer Varis' call; it would make a call of its own.

Whitestar16

I'm not sure how things work entirely on this website, so whenever I update a part, I'm not sure if my followers get a notification about it. If this is the case, then I apologize, because all of those notifications would be grammar corrections. Yeah. Unless I say otherwise, all of these updates you may or may not be receiving about my chapters is just me doing some editing. It's not actually important detail being added. 

Whitestar16

Hooray! My book has been added to a reading list by a complete stranger! This is very good. Apparently my books are becoming more and more public. Thank you all! 
          
          I'm going to do some quick self-advertising here because no one else can really do it for me. If you people are enjoying Varis Galanodel (which seems to be my most popular book) please check out my other books. They are part of a book series actually, the first one being Pyrus: Rise Of Darkness. The three Pyrus books that are published are all complete as well, although not half as good as Varis. Anyway, check those out if you want, and stay awesome.