Hi! If you love writing, pursue it. Don't make it longer when readers start to notice you but give your best so they'll love it the moment they click start reading. Write to express and not to impress... <3
I read your book its pretty good but i do think the chapters are a little too short. But i think the book has great potential. The story line is really good.
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