Xxfall3npetalzxx

What's the chapter in "our family" were minho calls i.n his baby and convinces him to write a letter to chan? I can't find it 

Wholesome_turbulence

@Xxfall3npetalzxx There's a few chapters I think you could be talking about.
            
            What I think you're likely talking about is the middle of chapter 26, "Jeongin's Lessons."  In that chapter, Minho calls him "my baby" and makes him write apologies and then they end up cuddling on the couch. Then he takes him to their childhood home.
            
            The chapter called "Minho's Memories" basically talks about Jeongin being a literal baby and how Minho loved him since he was born.
            
            Or the chapter called Reconciliation. Minho makes him call Chan.
            
            Or partway through the chapter "Girls Girls Girls" Minho basically scolds Jeongin like a kid for blaming Chan for his behaviour, and then hugs him afterward.
            
            
            
            In the first book, "Party of Eight" Chapters: "Altruistic" and "Something Borrowed," Minho calls Jeongin his baby.
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H_A_N_K_S_

Hi, so I got inspired by your book and came up with a story idea that is kind of similar to yours. For example, the part of the elder ones having to raise the younger kids because their parents die and a few adjustment problems. But at the same time, it has a completely different storyline, new characters, and allies with Skz's life (maybe, I don't know if the members are allowed to adopt their own stray kids). It's mostly chaos and less depth into emotions. Revolves around 7 girls, all got separated from their own family, ends up together, and navigates through chaos, hoping for stability and proper facilities and stuff. Would it be considered copying you if i write this story?

H_A_N_K_S_

heh..i slept at 3:30 so i got almost 3 hours of sleep and now im practicing b4 going to school. wish me luck, ill need it (mostly cuz i spend all the study leaves reading instead of doing maths...but we dont talk abt that )
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Wholesome_turbulence

@Muerta336 I think that sounds like a cool idea. Yeah. You should write it. I'd be interested.
            
            But shouldn't you get some sleep first? 
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emily1454750

Hii 
          I have an suggestion , only if you like it 
          Now that almost every one is happy in the family what about a chapter where the whole family is on a vacation and a serious fight happens between the brothers maybe about something of their past or maybe because of a misunderstanding or fight between their kids and because of which the adults fight. And the last straw would be harsh comment made by minho to hyunjin (if you want) and no one takes support of him and agrees to minho and because of this hyunjin makes a rash decision of breaking the contacts with all his brothers and after 4 years or 5 years the brothers meet again but in not so good circumstances and realization of what they have done hit them. 
          
          I know this is really off track and i don't even know how this came into my mind but i wanted to take it of my head . So yeah !

Wholesome_turbulence

@emily1454750 hoiiii.
            
            Thanks for the suggestion. I'll try to use part of it.
            Maybe the fight part, but I don't think I could include them not talking for that long. We'll see.
            I'll try to tag you if I use your suggestions.
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H_A_N_K_S_

hi, im M. 
          I have a story suggestion but most of the charecters would be of different age grp...if ur interested pls let me know. btw i love ur storied *^____^*

H_A_N_K_S_

tysm for checking it, u really are the best <3
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H_A_N_K_S_

hi, so i know i said ill write the above story idea, but i got distracted and started a new book..if  don't mind and if ur free could u check it out? No pressure or anything, i just need to know if its a good idea to continue, cuz it seems kinda...boring, i think? Id really like ur opinion on it, but only if u want to. Tyy <3
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Wholesome_turbulence

@Muerta336 
            Awe. That means a lot to me. I love reading your comments and messages. It encourages me to keep writing!
            
            Yes. Go for it! You'll do great! I'll wait for your story
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Wholesome_turbulence

@JustBlossomArmy 
          You know what?
          I actually agree with so much of what you said.
          Jeongin is supposed to be a really complex character, and as the youngest of so many older brothers, I think he felt really high expectations, because not only does he have the voice of Chan telling him what to do, but also 6 other older brothers.
          In a way, it kind of drove him to do what he did in terms of wanting to have freedom.
          I'm sure many in that situation would also turn to a friend group that has no expectations and feels really free.
          
          And I also agree that Chan's reaction would've been really shocking and hurtful, because he was used to Chan giving him everything. This would've been really shocking, and maybe it was in part because Chan didn't know what to do anymore.
          
          And I also agree that it would seem terrible to not have any contact with his family back home. Maybe I made it sound like it was their choice, but it was actually supposed to be that Jeongin didn't want to talk to them because he felt embarrassed. 
          
          And you're totally right that they did shame him for what he did, when honestly, maybe they should've been more sympathetic and supportive.
          And the fact that they made him feel so ashamed to the point where he didn't contact them long after he changed his bad attitude was kind of sad.
          I actually really love your analysis, because no one has commented as much on Jeongin's situation, but you are so right.
          
          Please keep letting me know what you think. 
          I do have at least one more big surprise in store for Jeongin.

Xxfall3npetalzxx

Is there a chance that you can make a part two or three to "princess syndrome"?

Wholesome_turbulence

@Xxfall3npetalzxx There's definitely a chance! I don't have it in the works currently, but I can likely do it in the future sometime!
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