@Whoops61
Author just saying , if you can :
Can you please add more grovelling parts to his character like almost 10 chps min or show 2-3 years of him GROVELLING , I mean he was emotionally cheating on his family but also financial cheating and still not agreeing to it
Do you know approximately how many chapters Choosing Us will be? I think it will be one that I have to wait to read when it is complete
@Whoops61 thank you for your response. I have seen your authors note also. I appreciate you being receptive to my and other readers thoughts. Again, loving this story, it does pull at the heart strings for Melody and Daisy.
@tarnz106 Thank you for your thoughtful question! I have been thinking about this also, as I have said in the description is no "emotional cheating" but there are "blurred lines." But I do recognize that the elements that you have pointed out are a kind of betrayal also (and that is definitely going to be addressed later in the story). I think that the definition that I was thinking of, if you can call it that, for "emotional cheating" involves a deep emotional bond, secrecy, sharing of feelings, excessive communication, emotional reliance on the other person. I don't see Micah developing that kind of relationship with Audra (however she might want it, and Melody fears it); however his emotional focus is taken away from his family in a detrimental way, but more because of his pull toward Ben (for more reasons than he really understands at this point). However, you and the other commenters have a point and I will change my description so as not to take anyone off guard when they read the story. Thank you!
Can’t wait to read Breaking Us on KU!! ❤️❤️❤️
@Whoops61 it's absolutely insane.
@Lizreader56 Thank you! I was able to have it taken down from the snowella app and now it is on ReadEase. UGH!
Hi! Just FYI, I came across an add on IG under username WindPath 45 that lead to an app called Snowella that had your story under the title Mark & Tessa. Their email to send claims of copyright infringement is Snowella.os@outlook.com
https://b.penguinovels.com/ad/L1Nub3dlbGxhLzc1MzUwMi8xNzYzNzAzMTA2OTg5L3BhZ2V4aGRqZg%3D%3D?adid=120238157118290471&utm_medium=paid&utm_source=ig&utm_id=120238156709450471&utm_content=120238157118290471&utm_term=120238156872270471&utm_campaign=120238156709450471&fbclid=PAb21jcAORZQlleHRuA2FlbQEwAGFkaWQBqyv3kZcGV3NydGMGYXBwX2lkDzU2NzA2NzM0MzM1MjQyNwABp4NtWMWndFm_ZTb7FeW9joQZLEDSTGxGxxCfNUt6qc41HyTIdNGJdbTzIXm4_aem_llXeemh5BHDv-RmkIgxgwA
Here is a link to Breaking Us on KU. Went live today! https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0FZ4KY7BL
Did your book move?
Can u check my story beneath the hate and give it a try pls
