Hello. I'm Soren and I've given up on my past fanfiction writing. My name is an alias. I've been trying to write stories with my characters. Tell me if I need to fix something. I wont take offence. I don't think all criticism is bad. If you want to suggest things, please do so. I would love to hear from people who have read my stories with eyes not belonging to the creator. It's a much better tactic then making family read my work. Thank you! Hope you enjoy the story!