WibblyWobbley

@HybridGurl omg I am SOOOO SORRY that it took so long to message back, I feel terrible about it. I completely forgot I had this second account! 
          	
          	However, if you're still looking to mix it up, try one family that hates another family, but the other doesn't hate the original.  Like Romeo's family hates Juliets, but Juliets doesn't hate Romeo's and just want things to be okay, so perhaps Juliets family attempts to match them together in order for Romeos family to end the fued between them, and Romeo's family agrees to it but only in order to get inside the family and kill everyone basically.
          	
          	Um. 
          	My mind isnt working so well, so I may come back with another idea once I get more sleep if you don't like that one xD

WibblyWobbley

@HybridGurl omg I am SOOOO SORRY that it took so long to message back, I feel terrible about it. I completely forgot I had this second account! 
          
          However, if you're still looking to mix it up, try one family that hates another family, but the other doesn't hate the original.  Like Romeo's family hates Juliets, but Juliets doesn't hate Romeo's and just want things to be okay, so perhaps Juliets family attempts to match them together in order for Romeos family to end the fued between them, and Romeo's family agrees to it but only in order to get inside the family and kill everyone basically.
          
          Um. 
          My mind isnt working so well, so I may come back with another idea once I get more sleep if you don't like that one xD

HybridGurl

I have a huge favor to ask! I love your ideas in If You're Thinking of Writing a Cliche! I was hoping you could give alittle insight on an overused yet classic theme: Forbidden love. It seems to me that its always two families/species/packs that don't get along until two teens fall in love and queue happy ending. Is there any way that you could think of to mix it up a bit? Thanks and keep up the good work <3

WibblyWobbley

There's a new chapter of If You're Thinking of Writing a Cliche out!  
          Sorry it's taken so long, and this next chapter (based on Vampire stories) may not be as good as the first, simply because I was rushed. 
          
          Anyways, I'll try and update To Become a Knight sometime this month, BUT I'm studying for my GED test so I can't make any promises on that right now.  
          
          Tell me what you think of this new chapter.
          
          Peace and Love,
          iJay

WibblyWobbley

@HolyCreamCrispies 
          The problem with Krisha was that it used to be someone else's story, but they let me adopt it and then deleted their account as they had too many family problems to continue writing.  
          She and I are talking right now, and she's considering taking her story back and finishing it up, which is great.  It will be put on this account whenever one of us decides who will write it though, we're just at a bit of a road block at the moment, so we both apologize.  

HolyCreamCrispies

Hey, I was just wondering if you were ever planning on putting Krisha back up? I really enjoyed it, but I remember you mentioning in one of your A/Ns that you collaborated with someone else. Does that person have it on their account? I really, really, really want to know what happens, what Krisha is, etc. Thanks.

rainbowcoven

I pretty much stumbled across your "critiquing" and I was wondering if you could pretty much critique a story of mine that I am currently working on. I wasn't sure on how to ask you, so I hope you don't mind me commenting on here. The story that I would like for your to read is Moonlit Dinner. The harsher you are the better :).  If there is a story of yours that you would like me to comment and read, then I will be happy to do the favour. Thank you and again if this isn't what you do, then sorry for the comment.