Well hello friend! I figured I would move the conversation here instead of on the book lol I did want to emphasize how much I DO NOT MIND you letting me know if there are some grammatical mistakes or if something doesn't flow right in the book I LOOOOVE your writing! And appreciate your input!
I did delete the thread only to keep the comments free for discussing the plot, funnies, or moments in the story people would like to emphasize on. You are always welcome in my comment section! Feel free to send me a message on my feed if you notice anything else, so I can fix!!
Thank you again for the advice! I am editing things tonight KEEP WRITING!!!
