I was wondering if you could make some time to look into a book I made and give me some feedback and constructive criticism so I could thoroughly build myself and my skills as a writer as well as get better at writing books/short stories as a whole. The books published, I'm still working on it but the first few chapters (8 chapters to be exact) are published, there is a bit of smutt, just a warning in case you don't like that type of stuff, in chapter 8. The Books called: The Orphanage.
Thank you for your time!
-Hailey.