Wildthing1811

No problem! It’s really awesome, and keep up the great work!!

@Turtwig19 no prob! It's a great piece and im looking forward to the rest! Keep up the great work!! 

@XXLXXL-009 anytime!! Keep on that grind, your time will come. Believe that

@Wildthing1811 You know what, in the last 11 months that I started writing, you're the only one who at least noticed my writing. The rest all look past the efforts I put into my prose, skim through the dialogues and say, 'good job, can't wait for the next chapter' or talk about my plot.  
            
            As appreciative as their comments and reviews are, it's hurting too that they neglect the part where I put my most energy and efforts into. It's somewhat like getting pregnant, you see. Everybody says congrats and a good job, but nobody knows how many times I've been fucked. Ha-ha-ha!
            
            Thanks for the compliment. It means a lot. :)

@XXLXXL-009 no problem man! I'm pretty sure I read the original version of this before bc when I saw it again today and began reading I remembered the beginning lol. But yeah it's a great piece of writing! Keep it up!! 

@NewBlade sure man! 

@Wildthing1811 mind reading my stuff?

@NewBlade what's up man 

@BelieveInTheBlade awesome dude! 

@Wildthing1811 I met so rookies 

@BelieveInTheBlade cookout? 

@BelieveInTheBlade yeah but like.. They're supposed to be 10 or 12 so it's pretty weird.. To me anyway. And if it were "official" then Serena should have went to Alola. 

@Wildthing1811 they kissed  at the end soooo...?

@BelieveInTheBlade that's so awesome!! And the ship just makes too much sense for it to not happen but yk.. Kids show 

@BelieveInTheBlade just gotta see how e everything clicks, but training camp starts soon and a I can't wait! 

@Wildthing1811 honestly ur right, it’s a whole bunch of names and guys who have huge egos, if it goes bad we are screwed :3

@BelieveInTheBlade I mean ig you can say that, but Zeitler I was happy with and peppers has a ton of potential. No doubt rn you won the trade as of now but who knows down the road. And yeah you guys are loaded on paper but remember that's not everything. Giants were loaded 3 years ago and they flopped. Chemistry is a huge part. Just hope Odell isn't gonna be a problem for your front office and coaching staff. But I like the browns chances, Giants... Not so much 

@kedragneel no problem! Thanks for such a great story to read! 

@IshaPurohit5 no problem! Thanks for giving me a great read! Can't wait for more updates! 

@Poke_Jason no problem! 

Nice to hear it from ya. Thanks man. 

@Poke_Jason anytime man, keep doing your thingggg. Lovin' it so far!