Will Shepherd

Hey everyone! Just a quick thing about my writing schedule.
          
          I have just finished my mock exam week, so that's why I haven't been writing lately, what with revision and the actual exams. I'm now trying to improve my writing for you all. 
          
          I feel as though I am good at my opening, my first chapters, but from there, I feel as though the detail, the atmosphere and all the good stuff starts to decrease. Synthesised was my latest attempt, I feel as though that was a little better, but not good enough in my eyes. 
          
          I would really appreciate some criticism from you guys! Constructive, of course, but criticism nonetheless. Drop me a message, comment on my stories or anything, help me improve for you! Reading is supposed to take you away to another world, I want that to happen to you!
          
          Signing off,
          Will ;P

I have unpublished all my stories that I am going to revisit, but in the mean time, I have published a new story! The Digital Trip is a Science Fiction story set in a city in a state of totalitarian control from murderous and merciless robot enforcers. When the upper levels of a deeper conspiracy are uncovered, many more questions are created...

I haven't updated my Deemo story in a long while, but it's by far my most popular...
          
          Should I try and get back into writing it? I haven't even touched it in so long.

Sorry I haven't been active recently, I've had a lot of work to do with school, but I am actually in the middle of writing a couple of new stories for you guys and gals! 
          I don't want to give too much away, but I'm planning a post-apocalyptic story about two teenage twins, a fantasy about a modern day thief trapped in Hell, a fantasy about a God of Death living as a human and a realistic fiction about a boy desperately trying to hide his dark secret from the world!
          
          Hope those ideas sound appealing! I'll post them in the near future, so stay tuned!