William2580
Are mental zoomies a thing? Because I think I just got the mental zoomies.
Though I suppose it is almost 11 pm where I live and that IS loopy hour so it shouldn't be that surprising...
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William2580
@Dark_frost_72930 I see, Maybe you could try something like what I was doing? Where you write down a sneak peek of the AU to get it out of your head, and then you can decide later if you want to continue with it. Another tip? Try combining your ideas. Some of the AUs in my concept book weren't well thought out since I was just starting, so with a couple of those I decided to mix them together so it would have more potential as a story. (I mean even for Crystal's story I've thrown most cannon story points plus one my otheAU ideas into a blender and I still don't know what exactly is gonna come out)
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William2580
Behold! A new story!
I said I would work on this once I got bored of my other one, and although that isn't exactly what happened, it's close enough.
I hope you enjoy the first chapter of ES AU: Crystal Decides to be Responsible! (The name is a WIP lemme know if you have any better Ideas)
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William2580
@Dark_frost_72930 I think I get it, but at the same time I'm just as confused as before cause grammar. I guess I'll check it out though.
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@ Dark_frost_72930 The context is the new world, the same as Kamen Rider Build when the last episode of the world repeats itself so all memories are lost and there is no sky wall if the Eeveelution Squad does not happen the coastal tribe will become extinct and there will be no incidents of death of Lapis, Sadie, Alex, Jin, Ralph like being attacked by Pokemon then it will not happen if Alfred does not go to prison because Anggak killed Lapis then it will not happen if Sylvia and Sally do not disappear without a trace
William2580
You're probably going to get tired of hearing this, but I'm most likely going to be late uploading again, I've had multiple things in my life take up a lot of time and I haven't had any mental energy for days now, I can barely even read, so I'm sorry.
William2580
FINALLY, IT'S DONE! THE CHAPTER I LOST MOTIVATION FOR IS DONE!
Truthfully, I can't apologize enough for being late posting this when I could have easily finished it months ago, but it’s done now, so I can move on to one of the chapters that I've been anticipating for a while now.
Anyways, hopefully I'll get the next one done in a reasonable time frame.
BAI!
William2580
Ok the editing is done, I will start work on the next chapter shortly but for now I encourage you to re-read chapter 1 because it changed the most when I was editing it.
And yes, chapters 1 & 2 being combined means the others moved down 1 in numbers. Is that confusing? Yes. Was it necessary? Probably not, but whatever.
My next post will probably be the next story part, so bye for now.
William2580
Hia.
It feels like literally forever since I posted chapter 6, but I guess that's the holidays for ya.
I'm sorry to say that the next chapter will be a bit behind schedule, reason being I've been rewriting chapter 1 so it isn't cringe. I'm also going to do a once-over on the other chapters in my story to make small edits and changes so things stay consistent.
Bai.
William2580
Apologies for taking so long on chapter 6, I got like 3000 words done in my first three days of working on it before I got distracted for a few weeks, so it should've been done a while ago. Good news is I'm working on it now, sooo...
I do have a good excuse for what distracted me for one of those weeks though, I found this amazing and hilarious book series called The Divine Dungeon. I would highly recommend reading it, it is really, really, well-written and very, very, funny.