@WilliamEst_love_
Thank you for taking the time to read and share your thoughts, I really appreciate it
I understand where your frustration is coming from, especially with William’s behavior and Est’s role in the relationship. The story is written as a slow-burn, and a big part of it focuses on Est’s patience, his emotions, and what he goes through before things start to shift.
It’s not meant to be a fast or obvious change, and the dynamic you’re seeing right now is intentional for the kind of story I’m telling. The development is more gradual and subtle rather than dramatic.
I completely understand if it’s not the kind of pacing or dynamic you prefer, but I hope you can still enjoy the story for what it is