Okay, I feel that I need to offer a bit of clarification on something...
Although I have received some very well intentioned constructive criticism on how I write, I feel I need to let all of my Lovely Followers know that, going forward, unless it is a blaringly obvious spelling error, or say, the line of a sentence has been cut in half with one half on one line and the other on a separate line, I'm really not open to it. I have a decidedly distinct style of writing; one that has had many compliments on... one that flows very well, and very descriptively. I mainly write for *me*... what *I* would like to read. If what I write is something someone else likes, then I have written it, by extension, for them as well.
We each have our own style of writing. We each like what we like... our own ideas about what works best, what is the right and wrong way to write.
So, with that view in mind, I will make all of my Followers a promise: Unless you especially wish for me to give constructive notes on what you write, I shan't. I'll keep it strictly to what I like about your story. If I don't like your story, I simply won't say so, and won't read any further. Same for me. If you like, or don't like, what I write, say so! I promise I won't take it personally.
Other than that, I wish you all well!