I would like to say that your story is absolutely incredible. I've read several of stories and it was without a doubt one that captivated me a lot. Your storie deserves a lot of credit. You can add incredible details and compile an engaging story by following the events of the game, without making your story, like many others, an exact copy of the game, or an erroneous story that is built along scenes of jealousy, many sexual and sometimes unrealistic moments. It portrays important themes such as depression, personal growth and also portrays how a young couple explores their feelings. And it actually makes everything more real, especially what concerns Sebastian, the grief he had to go through, the true feelings, instead of representing the usual Sebastian as super confident in himself, convinced and irrialistically invincible.
