Pls give constructive criticism/feedback, this is my first story so I'm trying to learn :>
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Wilt__
Jul 31, 2023 05:02AM
Hi lol Kinda lost motivation for Eclipse, the writing style is just a little professional for me. I get really impatient, not sure how to make the story long yk?I’m currently writing a new story, t...View all Conversations
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The Super Freaks
Amelia has been taken to God knows where to become the next super soldier along with three boys.
She now has...
Eclipse
An exclusive overnight party named Eclipse only opens twice a year, during the sun and moons eclipses. The pa...