KC

Thank you!!  

I’d say start laying the clues of the prophecy, possibly show the pov of the next protagonist. I think since your only chapter 1 you should go easy on major events.
            
            From how you wrote the first chapter it feels more like a mystery than a direct threat. Maybe lean on that and start building the characters and ground work for the big bad.
            
            You could also explore the affects from the last war with the rogues since most of them joined the clan I could assume life would be hard to connect with the clans. 

Well I'll be waiting for you to get home then! :D

Oh hell yeah man, I’m gonna have to finish fire wither when I get home! 

@Red_Death2000 thanks red, just need to not be busy so I can write the next chapters.

Great! I'm in a bit of writer's block right now... Ugh I hate it. :( :D

@Red_Death2000 I want to but real life is just sucking me away Ive just been to busy with school and jobs and family. I might post this one ive been working on but I cant guarantee ill ever finish. I appreciate the offer tho ill think about it

@Whitejay0307 I definitely feel booped

You're welcome.

@Red_Death2000 I see thank you for the insight! I was hoping for more of a singular page how many words should you have, however, I think I get the jist it's all about how comfortable you are with how many words there are. Thank you

A good word count for a chapter varies.
            
            Short Story - Depends on how many chapters, 7 chapters=5000 some-odd words total
            Novella-Again, spends on how many chapters, normally 8 chapters=40,000 words total
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            Novel-Normally 18 chapters=180,00 words total
            Mega-Novel-Normally 20 chapters=390,000 words total
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            Try and make your books have words in total that match those. Many chapters could be short, like in 'A Wrinkle In Time' one chapter is just one sentence. See what's comfortable for you.