KC

Ofc when I get time, like I said I got a job and shit man. I’ve been working on colonies of the dead this other one but I can’t just rapid fire them like you do red lol

Hey btw my email is olivertoharkness@gmail.com 

I…. Woah. I uh…. She never said anything to me. Perhaps we weren’t as good as friends as I thought.

@Red_Death2000 just something that's NSFW, I respect her privacy, so I won't say it on this site, but she was dealing with alot of stuff when we talked. So hopefully she's doing okay.

@Wingedfool1 I’ll try to. But no promises! Haha.

@Red_Death2000 do what you need to do man, don't worry I'm still supporting ya from the sidelines. Hope you write something really good

Yeah I've actually ALSO moved to a new city... in another state, but in a new city! Haha...
            I can't believe I am saying this but my sister is pregnant as well. That's just... crazy? I'm glad that you're focusing on other more important things and not consumed in this work. I still am on here, sometimes, and I have updated my WC books but... yeah. Nice man.
            
            I'll try to stay cool but it's 98 degrees right now. :I Haha!

@Red_Death2000 okay yeah, sorry for the late response man. you add Spangledcloud he's actually in two of my books lol
            
            his description is a Smokey grey and white tom cat with spangles surrounding him
            
            if you do anything with him he's usually a stern fellow, basically a rules lawyer.

Perhaps one of the main characters of one of your books. Maybe just shows up in mine because of some weird portal rift thing? XD I don’t know.

@Red_Death2000 ohhh, well sure i suppose so, idk what kind of character though. Any thoughts?

@Red_Death2000 yeah ill try, ill come back but right now i just need to sort stuff out. Ill be around though so dont worry, thank ya again red.

Well man I hope you clean up the bad shit in your life. Hopefully you’ll come back my guy. Good luck. ✌

@Red_Death2000 thanks red, unfortunately i think im gonna take a step back from wattpad for a minute. Some bad shit came up in my real life and im just feeling bad.
            
            ill probably finish up a chapter or two from my two books then go on a hiatus, ill try to still read your book though man. Im just feeling like shit right now, so thank you Red for your support its very kind.

Thank you!!  

I’d say start laying the clues of the prophecy, possibly show the pov of the next protagonist. I think since your only chapter 1 you should go easy on major events.
            
            From how you wrote the first chapter it feels more like a mystery than a direct threat. Maybe lean on that and start building the characters and ground work for the big bad.
            
            You could also explore the affects from the last war with the rogues since most of them joined the clan I could assume life would be hard to connect with the clans. 

Well I'll be waiting for you to get home then! :D

Oh hell yeah man, I’m gonna have to finish fire wither when I get home! 

@Red_Death2000 thanks red, just need to not be busy so I can write the next chapters.

Great! I'm in a bit of writer's block right now... Ugh I hate it. :( :D

@Red_Death2000 I want to but real life is just sucking me away Ive just been to busy with school and jobs and family. I might post this one ive been working on but I cant guarantee ill ever finish. I appreciate the offer tho ill think about it