Taegi2016

Hey!
          I wanted to comment on your really valid POV about my story Not Him. I had replied to your comment earlier, but since I deleted the whole post, you probably couldn’t see it.
          
          So yes, I totally get that they didn’t really go on dates and that it can feel a bit rushed. But here’s how I see it: they’re passionate, they crave each other, and that’s why their arguments hit so hard. They went through:
           1. “we hate each other,” phase
          2.  “we’re ready to drop our online crushes for each other,” phase
          3. “we had the most perfect unplanned date” phase… 
          
          and then suddenly take things slow? Nah... It had to be an explosion of pure, raw feelings after so much restraint. You see what I mean? ^^ Yoonkook hated each other with passion and now they’ll love each other with that same intensity.
          If we stalled again with “they almost did,” or “they’re spiraling,” or “their friends are side-eyeing them,” it might start to feel a bit redundant. Anyway, I hope you’ll enjoy the next update and maybe even be pleasantly surprised. I really love your support ( I even chased you to your wall lol) so I truly hope you'll have a good time reading Not Him!
          Bisous

Winter812287

@ Taegi2016  OH dear! I appreciate your reply! and don't worry, I understand your point and you're %right, the last chapter was really good ,it's a proof that you were right with your choice ( I didn't comment on that chapter like I used to do cause I wanted to give yumkook some privacy we didn't see anything yumkook ) this story is funny (I like funny stories!!),I like the way you write and narrate  events.Im excited and waiting patiently for next chapters.
            We do enjoy the story and we'll keep enjoying it 
            English is not my first language,  I hope I've managed to express my thoughts clearly !
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