Víctor Andres Ortiz

Hi everyone! And happy New Year!! Hopefully everyone had a great time. Alright a few moments earlier I posted that I will talk about the huge changes that I made for my first book, alright here they are:
          1. The new name of the book; it’s now called The Great War (A Dark Universe).
          2. The new cover of my book.
          3. I made some changes in the story, so I strongly recommend to read it again.
          4. The name of a character has change: Victor Velmont is now Valerius Velmont (and personally sounds better for me).
          5. This is huge and amazing!! I finally made the chapters way smaller and more suitable to read.
          6. I corrected more misspell, so you could have a better experience with my book.
          
          Alright guys that’s about it, hopefully you guys are having a great time now and sorry for not being posted new chapters of my second book called Seven Deadly Sins, which by the way that book had a change too. The change of my second book was the cover. I promise I will continue writing the second book just that I want to made a few changes too in my second book, so when I’m done with that, I will continue the story.

Huge!!! Changes of my first book are coming. I’ll tell the changes later and be exited because they are amazing!!

Hi everyone I just publish the first chapter of my new book Called “The Seven Deadly Sins (A Dark Universe storyline)” hope like it.

Tell me what you think about it and let me know if you rather like me to first go back to my first book and make the chapters smaller or after I finish my second book, I go back and make the chapters smaller in my first book.

Hi everyone, so I having correcting my first book lately. It’s not anymore a dialogue book, Now! You can call it a book and of course I having correcting the billions misspelled that I had. 
          I want to inform you I have being working on me second book and it’s called “The Seven Deadly Sins (A Dark Universe storyline)” and it’s about seven monsters that once were humans like you and me but something bad happened to them and they become their worst monsters. Now I want to ask you something, do you want me first to go back in my first book and make the chapters a whole lot smaller or would you like me first finish my second book and then go back to my first book and make the chapters smaller?

Also I want to apologize to everyone for me taking so long in bringing you this final two chapters so late but I really was working hard on the end of the story because I wanted to be good not only for me but to all of you.

Well everyone the final two chapters of my story have arrived. Hopefully you have enjoyed this journey has I did and expect another book. Now am going to focus in to correct the tons of misspelled that I have, so you can enjoy more the story. I might do some changes to make the story better, so pay attention in the story. Have a good night.

Before I finish writing Chapter 10 and publish it, I want to read all your thoughts about my story. I want to read what things you liked so far, what things you haven’t like too and the things that you may not understand, so I can clarify to you, so you can catch up with the story and continue reading it. You can give me feedback too if you want and I want you to tell me personally what you think of my story. Hopefully all of you are having fun with my story. 
          Have a great day or night everyone. I wish you the best for all of you.

Act 3 The Great War Chapter 9 it’s already published. Enjoy it my friends.

Sorry for taking so long to publish chapter 8 guys but I have been busy all of these days. But don't worry I’ll do my best to give you the other chapter quicker. I promise. Have a nice day or night.