@WithLoveTaz I just discovered ur profile through Amanat, started in the morning and by dawn I had completed...It was a good story but the emotions lacked something, like the conversations, the feelings there was something missing in the story...am not criticising am just giving feedback, u write so good but the emotions of the character are lacking...Continue writing ..just improve this u will rock it...I'm all in for the support, keep shining...lots of love :)