WolfDragon52

Please note that I am not an expert at writing novels considering my best subjects are math and science, not reading. The fanfiction that you see before you on my profile page is my very first one. I may only seem more experienced since I have been reading fanfiction for over five years. I recommend reading a lot of fanfiction for your story so that it can give you bright ideas and unexpected twists you can add for your viewers! If you want any more advice, feel free to ask although it might take a while. It took me around two hours to write this documented review from the bottom of my heart and as my experience towards other writing. 

Knowing What Emotion / Description, What Does it Look Like : 
                       I will use your prologue for emotion, using more description words, on what I believe what you were conveying to me… 
                       Spending his entire life as a lab rat, Jamison, an anguis (snake hybrid), has gone through torture no teenager should ever have to face. With this pain and suffering, the only person keeping him insane is his best friend, Angel, a cattus (cat hybrid).
                       Finally being set free to the normal world, will they be able to adjust to a world without any agony or will their mental state crumble before their eyes? Seeing a whole different world crash before them, their bond between each other grows stronger every day. Is it just a brotherly connection? Or is something even more powerful forming?

How to Apply Good Emotion / Description : 
                        Basically, do whatever you feel with your five senses including your feelings. Seriously, really do whatever you want but whatever you do DO NOT exclude because it will make the story feel a bit dull. Like, ‘feeling the warmth of the bedsheets surrounding me’, ‘feeling my hand on my chest, pumping wildly with excitement’, or ‘seeing the strangers hand before me, I give my best defensive stance while slowly backing away.’