WolfRose2004
@I_NEED_A_LIFE_04 Okay Dianette while I appreciate you giving feedback, you went a little harsh. This was the first story I have ever made on Wattpad and yes it DEFINITELY is not my best work. I know it moves fast and some things don't make sense and I apolgize for that. You have to understand that I am not working on this story anymore and am more than likely going to pull it off and delete it. It was a confusing and odd first edition. I was desperate to put something up and I went to fast for most tastes. Anybody who read my story would be confused if it weren't from my POV. While your feedback is appreciated it took me a solid minute to read.