Wolf Sama

@WolfSama8 I know. I remember that idea. Glad it surprisingly fits into that.

@WolfSama8 HELL YES!

@Jss2141 gonna be honest, that idea got a spiritual successor, where Mirabel got kicked out, found the omnitrix and she took Ben's spot in the series and unlike Ben, Mirabel saw glory and picked the right girl that being looma 

@WolfSama8 then I'd call this an extra slow burn. Though a lot of this story felt forced to me.

@harrisonwellsfan999 that's mostly because its a slow burn story, each chapter is either multiple chapters for 1 day (which i try to avoid since I prefer 1 day = one chapter but sometimes it just doesn't work out that way) or each chapter is only a day or 2 apart. This whole first and second book is they are all still in the first semester at school, at the tail end of it by the current chapter but still 

@WolfSama8 Well I guess you have a point, but your dialogue is rather....well it's just doesn't show any real growth to the characters. Sure this is a fan fic but even still they have to have growth showing. Izuku still feels like the same way he was in the beginning

@WolfSama8 probably not. I'm having fun writing the snippets 

@WolfSama8 is this the end

@JohnSCPLevel4 Come back when your stories are mhm...better!

@WolfSama8 Worse than Family Guy.
            
            You are like Teen Titans Go!

@JohnSCPLevel4  better than family guy, so I'll take it ‍♂️

@ViceBranham well. You'll be happy to know that I added a new chapter do it.