Wolfie_Everglade

@Absinthe-X @Wolf_Tale ((but I just posted? Wouldn't it be better if everyone went twice so on the third time we coul go by the posting order without confusion. We've already went twice, others only went once. I don't want to go through the trouble of skipping others for if I posted once more than I would've gone three times while others only went once))

Sadistic_Killers

(( okay. You need more detail dear , how would he get hit if he dodges the kick. There are many ways to do something such as blocking or dodging. But it's all in the detail , adding a physical image in another's head. And it isn't a bad post , it just lacls detail. And uf someone is attacking from behind you shouldn't back up , focus on both people. I know it's hard to do but again.  Detailing , once you get good enough eventually you cpuld take three people on without god modding. It would sort of play out like a matrix movie, but you would still need to take some damage.  You can only really choose to block one or two. Like this post , your character sees out of her peripheral. If somethin is completely behind her that is going to be hard to see. Unless she moved in a way that twists her body. So , just add more detail okay. You'll get it dear. @Wolfie_Everglade ))