super glad you enjoyed reading it and i would be glad to critic your work but i take my critiquing seriously so im gonna say what i think about your story, good or bad:D Just tell me if you want my critique and ill be happy to do it.
@DrewAltheo Your welcome! I just love your book!!! Its amazing!!! I really enjoy reading so that should mean something XD! Anywhoo im actually most likely going to write a book maybe O-O and i would appreciate some possible criticism...( i know! i never thought i would *ASK* for criticism!!!!)