Wolves_21

New book on the way:
          	
          	"Little Girl Lost"
          	
          	Edalyn Clwathorne knew she was never meant to have children with her curse getting worse and her being a wanted criminal by the Emperor’s Coven. However, after stumbling upon a closed off and jittery nine-year-old, during a normal market day, she finds herself becoming the very thing she thought was out of her reach 
          	
          	Lucelyn “Luc” Noceda was certain her entire life was a lie. From the very moment she took her first breath, her Mami and Grandma, hid her true identity away from society and herself. It wasn’t until one mistaken, frightful day that revealed who she truly was. Now, away from the over looming presence of the people who want to hide her away, the pressure of being the smart, little girl in high school, and the very reminder of her being a mistake, she begins to realize how lost she was.

Wolves_21

New book on the way:
          
          "Little Girl Lost"
          
          Edalyn Clwathorne knew she was never meant to have children with her curse getting worse and her being a wanted criminal by the Emperor’s Coven. However, after stumbling upon a closed off and jittery nine-year-old, during a normal market day, she finds herself becoming the very thing she thought was out of her reach 
          
          Lucelyn “Luc” Noceda was certain her entire life was a lie. From the very moment she took her first breath, her Mami and Grandma, hid her true identity away from society and herself. It wasn’t until one mistaken, frightful day that revealed who she truly was. Now, away from the over looming presence of the people who want to hide her away, the pressure of being the smart, little girl in high school, and the very reminder of her being a mistake, she begins to realize how lost she was.

Wolves_21

Which one sounds better:
          
          Claire Brooks, just a mere human, finds herself caught in the middle of an intergalactic centuries old war over her planet when she goes out of her way to help a pregnant Rose Quartz. 
          
          Or
          
          Just days after turning fourteen, young high school student Claire Brooks find her small world of attending classes and preparing for the future when mysterious strangers that go by the Crystal Gems be suddenly appear and turn her life upside down.

MysticalStoryWeaver

@Wolves_21 Second
            But try to correct it 
            "strangers who call themselves the Crystal Gems suddenly"
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