@Passion20 there is a lot unsaid because its not finish and its used as anticipation to get the story flowing and the reader interested, and the characters thought is pro-longed to leave readers thinking, but thank you :)
Your story is dope but it leavs a lot of thing's unsaid and your chapters are short you should make them longer and finish the characters thought before you go to the next chapter
Your story is dope but it leavs a lot of thing's unsaid and your chapters are short you should make them longer and finish the characters thought before you go to the next chapter
@Ivyboo Nah nah your ideas quite good and umm well something I can't do because its based on 'Romeo & Juliet' the point of the story is to portray it in that type of way but in modern with extra bits and thank you for the compliment hun <3 xx