Wonderingwithivanka

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          	Guys are you not liking my story?

Ishkooo

Hello Reader!!!!
          
          I am a new writer and I write as a hobby. This is my first work. It's still in progress. It's a slowburn mystery romance.
          
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          Here's a quick link to my ongoing work- 
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/391079044?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Ishkooo

SwaraSharma678

DON’T YOU DARE IGNORE THIS MESSAGE! 
          
          Oops—was that too threatening?  My sincerest, most innocent apologies! (Not really. I meant it. You better read this. )
          
          See, I’m just a sweet little voice in your head, gently manipulating you into reading something that will steal your heart, ruin your standards, and leave you blushing at completely inappropriate moments. Sounds fun, right? 
          
          So, listen up—Eesha: sweet, full of dreams, zero wifey skills, and suddenly thrown into an arranged marriage with Dev Singh Rajwansh. Now, this man? Too hot, too broody, too… everything. He doesn’t just talk—he commands. He doesn’t flirt—he smirks. And when he says “you’re mine” in that deep, dangerous voice? Good luck, sweetheart. You’re done for. ‍
          
          But wait, it gets better! We’ve got nosy devars-deranis, a chaotic joint family, and one evil Bua Ji plotting like she’s the villain of a daily soap . And poor Eesha? Let’s just say her pehli rasoi is heading straight for disaster while her hot-as-sin husband watches, arms crossed, looking way too amused. 
          
          So tell me, sweetheart—are we getting love? War? Or just Eesha turning redder than a tomato while Dev enjoys the view?  Only one way to find out.
          
           Come on now, be a good reader and click: https://www.wattpad.com/story/378533174-sweetest-sin?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Shanvi978
          
          ⚠️ WARNING: Dev Singh Rajwansh is dangerously addictive. Side effects include obsession, unrealistic husband expectations, and the inability to function normally after reading. Proceed at your own risk. ❤️