@leovela Here's more dialog I'm thinking of adding in, tell me what you think:
"Do you like him?"
"No!" Maylune paused and thought for a moment. "I don't know?"
"Is he handsome?"
"Not really? He's short, he wears these big glasses, and his hair is always a mess."
"Hm..."
Maylune began to stroke Fufu's fur, her voice softening. "But he is talented, and he is brave. He stood up for me even though he's nowhere near as powerful as my brother. Even if what he did was stupid, I wish that I could be like that."
Star grinned at Maylune without reply.
Maylune looked flustered again. "I don't know! I don't know."