WreckerX_755

Hi. I just finished your story and it wasn’t the best story I’ve ever read, and it isn’t the worst.  But there’s room for improvement. A way to improve is by putting “” in your story when there’s dialogue. For example: “Fucking hell!” Eric screamed in anger as he threw his phone across the room. Another thing you can do is add more details. Adding details can make it it more compelling AND it will make your story longer. That’s a win, win situation right there. So Im not saying that you suck, just you can improve your story to make it even better then it is. This Is TheGoldenGrunt Signing Off! PEACE!