Wren_K

new poem up. wanted to read something new well have it up

Yeah seriously. I read about that too. Times magazine. It was so messed up.

mind reading my poems?

Thank you for your wonderful comment on my story, 'Painting Love'
          Your words made me really happy and I also appreciated the critique. 
          
          So the answer to your first question: This prologue should be in present tense. After I read your comment, I checked through it again, but couldn't find any mistakes for that matter. The only times when I used past tense was when "Jamie" talked about the things that happened in the past. If I still got it wrong, could you please tell me where my mistakes are?
          
          As for question number two: I thought about that as well, since the ocean is not nearly as gentle as I "made" it. And you're absolutely right about love being "stormy" as well, but Jamie basically only sees the gentle Luke, she doesn't see his rough side. Or rather, she can't. That's why I didn't add it in the prologue. I'll most likely add your suggestion later though, when the story starts unfolding. 
          
          I believe I don't have to say much about number three. Four words are enough: thank you so much. 
          
          And I'm glad you're still interested even though it's usually not something you'd read. :)

Hello i was wondering if when you get a spare moment that you'd be able to check out my story "Mad as a Hatter" and vote/comment? It'd be greatly appreciated and if you'd like me to return the favour just ask :)

Please Read my new poems "She's Beautiful" and "Broken heart of mine."
          
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hey! would you mind reading my story angels and death plz? it would mean alot to me if you could, and comment on whether you liked/loved it or thought it was complete trash. maybe if u did like and luv it u could vote n fan???? anywhoo, thnx so much! 
          http://www.wattpad.com/421735-angels-and-death-part-2

Hey, If you like stories about badass girls with a dangerous secret, you should read Elite Academy! Its my first try at writing lol :/
          
          Vote, Comment, Fan? I'll return the favor!
          
          xx

Ok, everyone who cares, I'm away on holidays til Wed. Bye bye

WELCOME TO WATTPAD...
          :D
          hey,
          
          I got this INTENTIONS: MONEY AND LUST,
          it's a love story...so if you want will you read it..i got it until ch.13
          
          and i got this one too..
          
          INTENTIONS: FIGHT AND CONQUER..
          that's a fight between aliens, witches, werewolves, and vampires..
          I'm just starting it for the watty awards..
          
          so don't forget to vote and comment...
          then cast a vote..
          
          Thanks..
          
          XD 
          
          and one more thing, I'm a guy..
          ahaha..
          
          just to let you know..
          
          thanks in advance..
          XD