Writelife-123

@ Writelife-123  Girlll I think I got a little carried away LMAOOO the text ended up being kind of long, but there really wasn't any way to make it shorter, too many things happened.
            
            I love your story and I love your writing!! It's genuinely so good ❤️❤️

@ Writelife-123  I also want her to talk at some point about her shitty father. He may be trying to make up for it now, and I hope he is, for God's sake, but the man deliberately left his troubled daughter home alone to "give her privacy"??
            I want her to briefly comment on how lonely she was when her mother was sick and her father was always with her mother. Mark practically lived in their house. I want her to mention Caoimhe being dr*gged with Liz's medication. CAOIMHE WAS NOT AN ACCOMPLICE!! She was a teenager who, yes, made mistakes, but she was still a teenager and always will be, because of him. She made mistakes, she was blinded because she thought Mark was a good person, but he wasn't. She LOVED him. It makes me sick just remembering how much she trusted him.
            I want her to talk about how manipulative Mark Allen is, how he pushed everyone away from Caoimhe, how he was constantly talking badly about Darren, who was Caoimhe's best friend (and I want Darren to be mentioned every now and then, just so her friends know she had known the Lynches for a long time without even realizing it). I want her to talk about how abandoned Lizzie felt when he ran away, because Darren was the ONLY one of her sister's friends who didn't judge her.
            Mark made Lizzie keep his secrets, and when Lizzie finally realized it was something wrong and didn't want to do it anymore, he threatened her and kept threatening her friends, telling Lizzie he would go after them if she told anyone, that nobody would ever believe her, and so on.
            I want you to talk about the day Caoimhe died, about how he literally suffocated Lizzie until she agreed that it was Gibs' fault.
            

@ Writelife-123  I really need her to talk about when it started, and how, the manipulation when she was still just a little kid, him telling her he was curing and medicating her, telling her she couldn't tell people about it or it wouldn't work anymore. Then after some time he started giving her birth control. I NEED the pregnancy to be addressed, and for there to be tests that prove it.
            I want her to talk not only about what he did to her physically, but mentally too. How she slowly lost the will to live, how she was exhausted and couldn't take it anymore.
            I want her to talk about Caoimhe, and how she only remembers parts of those FUCKING 3 WEEKS, and how she remembers Caoimhe's letter and remembers being in the car with Caoimhe. Her sister was unconscious; obviously she had either already passed away or had been medicated with Liz's medication.
            I'd like her to comment on the conversations she had with Gibs about Mark, because in the end, everything she said he was doing to Caoimhe was actually being done to her. That they didn't like Mark anymore, but they didn't feel safe speaking up because they felt like nobody would believe them (which eventually happened...).
            I want her to talk about the adults not believing her when she talked about the "monster," and how her medication was gradually switched to anti-hallucination drugs for hallucinations she didn't even have. How that made her condition worse, where she already struggled to understand what was happening, and now she couldn't even tell whether she was awake or having a nightmare. While it was happening, she thought she was having a nightmare; when she woke up the next day and saw the marks, her mind simply couldn't understand.

glad to hear you're doing okay! get some rest on your holiday, we'll be here when you're ready❤️

@wstsiderem hey Thankyou so so much for checking in I have had a lot going on recently and I’ve also been away on holiday so struggling to update, when I’m back I’ll work on getting a couple chapters out, sorry to have you all waiting and I appreciate you a lot ❤️

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I’m not a hundred percent sure, hopefully not too long, I’m trying to make sure everything is the best it can be 

@Writelife-123 honestly I think it would be unique and interesting if it 2ssnt anyone listed here but rather someone she wasn't that close to

@Writelife-123 definitely Joey

Omg please please please let it be Joey  I will die to read this. Btw I love your writing sm and hope you come back soon xxx

@Writelife-123 damn u write so much and often, didn't think I would hit the jackpot like this, thank youu!!!

I try to post daily, often once a day and on occasion twice, depending how far ahead i am, as I sort of write as we go, so usually only have about one in drafts, hope that helps

@user57292728 Thankyouu it’ll definitely be quite a few as there’s a lot I want to involve and I’ve hardly covered half of my ideas 

Take as many chapters as you need. I mean that. Literally make 1 million chapters if you want cause I’ll read them

I can't actually tell you unfortunately as I'm not sure, I'm currently writing as we go, I do have a few ideas I definitely want to include so it may take a bit of time hope that helps ‍♀️ 

Thankyou so much and Yess definitely , I’ll include some, they won’t necessarily be the best interactions at this point in time but there will be some :)