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Could you please give me feedback on the book I'm writing currently? Thank you.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/291899484?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=doulan_18&wp_originator=0JmbQCmSBlf4uG%2Begl%2FP54LKIbHCBltwW8UPsmQz5qfRVRFfhmpmMOcsXPnn%2BcDiDU9J1QsGcBrIucuXsImZkCuUCxTrsfCn%2Fy1LRjFppoEHPOI7WTS3q26Zwtps11Ti
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Hello!
I got some responses from people who want to be an admin, and I will be messaging them soon!
I honestly just look for people who are willing to read and give feedback on other's works, so if you're interested please message me.
Hopefully two admins will be added, and I'm so sorry for being on hiatus!
-Tanya
This idea sounds awesome! In your bio it says you're looking for admins, how would I apply? x
Could you please review my book Belladone and give me some feedback? I'd very much appreciate that...(although I've only written like what...3 chapters...)! Thank you for your time!
Could you please give me some feedback on this story I'm writing? It's called Sea Witch
I would also love if u could check my other book its called "Her mates" your comment will be appreciated ☺☺
@Gracie_010 I think your book will really get somewhere! Maybe, just edit the chapters a little bit more and add more details to the surroundings, etc. -Tanya
Um...Sorry for disturbing again but after the helpful feedbacks on my previous books, I'd love it if you checked out my this story too! Don't worry, it's a short story ♥ http://my.w.tt/UiNb/NHD5B2HJVB
@_no_dream_is_too_big Thank you so much and you really helped a lot! ♥♥ I'll definitely keep it in mind ♥♥♥
@_no_dream_is_too_big It's alright! I actually enjoy reading your books. I absolutely love Rose and Evan and the fact sometimes they can seem like polar opposites. I like how you made a point in Evan's perspective where in he might be so small to Rose but she was becoming someone big to him. The expression of emotion is just great. The twist in the end was shocking and could really twist a reader's emotions. Maybe just the introduction make it a little clearer about what the setting or theme of the book is. Lastly, a tip for just overall writing any story is to write with your own style and elaborate things more properly through words, not being so uptight about finishing the work is a great thing I suggest to any writer really so you won't have to rush and the transition of the words go along well. Do continue to write, have a nice day! -Tanya
Hello Wattpaders!
I will continue reading, recommending and giving feedback to books! I'm so sorry for the wait. I hope to be able to let this community get active again.
-Tanya
Obviously no one's going to read this but oh well, a girl can always try right? ;)
http://my.w.tt/UiNb/MpP7TLGRjB
@_no_dream_is_too_big It's no problem! And thank you so much for reading and for the great feedback! ♥ I'll certainly keep it in my mind!
@_no_dream_is_too_big Oh, I'm so sorry for the late response! I have been on Hiatus since October.. Anyway, I have read the first few chapters of your book. I just have to come across and say that I love the idea and theme of the book. I would suggest just some minor things such as indenting the paragraphs and making them more efficient (if that made any sense at all). As you may know, a paragraph has one idea and it seems like you may have trouble being able to tell the audience your exact vision or how you want them to see the situation you have written. There were so many good points I have to point out though, the plot and the build up was absolutely great. You really do write in a way that intrigues the audience into reading more. I have also seen how you create this connection with the audience, as some can relate to the current situation. I hope this helps! Sorry for the wait, again.