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Synthesis of scattered pieces your story was really amazing I like the plot of the story. how Daniyal and Shifa met, their friendship I really like the development in their story. the story was touch of reality. I'm glad you clearly mentioned about why Anwar behaviour was always strict towards shifa. indeed I actually found her foolish in some of the situation. But I really didn't like Daniel's behavior with his ex, Why did he invite her to stay at his house? I mean what may be the reason but no wife would ever like her husband's ex to stay at her house and moreover why was there a need for him to give her those letters? Daniyal kuch zyada hi khub ko samajhdar samajh raha tha I literally dislike his character when adeena that witch enter in his life with an ugly motive and how's he's behaving like a deaf and dumb person when she's clearing stating that she wants to become his second wife.
Overall your book is awesome Zaryab, manha, zeedan, alshaf and Aariz are adorable characters. But I'm angry with you, you didn't mention about Bilal kids and his wife name when he's my second favourite character after Anwar.
I literally want separate book's of Hamdan, shifa and Bilal children. If you ever write do tell me.
Thanks for this amazing super duper amazing story