whosthatgirl_23

Hi, I’m a new writer and I’ve started writing a book called “out of bounds”. It would mean so much to me if you could take a look and read it. 
          
          
          https://my.w.tt/fizJ3ZNjm6
          
          It is about a 17- year old girl named Angel who teams up with a jock to uncover mysterious vanishings of people in the town on Fordel. 
          
          Please give it ago and ANY feedback would be much appreciated as I would like to make this book as perfect as possible. 
          Thank you ❤️