Welcome to Wattpad!
I read your story as you wish and you did a really good start on your first story. You should continue but, I think you should keep it more on topic.
My advice to you, try to keep it original. Don't write a story that many people have written over and over again. Like maybe.. you could include conflicts that are something out of the ordinary, something nobody will expect.
Have fun, don't be down if you don't get the amount of fans, votes or comments as you would like. Don't hesitate to ask me again. :)
