kozuua

Hey @Writingonaphone! I've just finished chapter 96 and wanted to give you some critique. 
          I think you wasted a lot of your story after you just summarised everything that was happening after Angelicas "death(?)". I hope you can Go Back at some point and rewrite some of it. I love your story and especially your Humor, but you just skip some parts too fast instead of using the potential in your story a bit more. 
          Maybe this criticism can help you improve your story a little ^^
          
          - kozuua

kozuua

@ Writingonaphone  Sure, no problem! I hope you keep up the Work! I'm looking forward to your improvements!
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Writingonaphone

Hi again @kozuua I thank you so much for the constructive criticism :D I was having some trouble thinking up of scenarios/events and that it was somehow keeping me from moving forward with the story.
            
            In short I was having some writer's block XD and yes, I admit of rushing some parts so that we can go forward, but thank you so much for pointing that out because your inputs helps me further develop my writing :D
            
            Also, thank you again for taking your time to read and putting in your votes <3
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Ikurinn

Hi Author! I really loved your story, it's really amazing and I will be here supporting it
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Ikurinn

@Writingonaphone No problem and your welcome ( ´ ▽ ` )
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Writingonaphone

@RandomeShipper Sorry for the very late reply and I wish to thank you very much for the support <3
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Just_Call_Me_JAMES

hi author can you please change the titles of every chap. insted of impractical magic chap 1...or so can you please just make it simple like imchap1-the begging or what the chap. title is... please thanks...

Writingonaphone

Hello, Hunter_Dark666 I'm not that creative when making titles so I just used the chapters instead.
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Just_Call_Me_JAMES

hehe... can you please give a title aside "IMchap1"?
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FantasyFreak04

Ho @Writingonaphone, I would like to give my 100% support on your book. I do really love. I awakens my imagination as I read your work. I hope you can publish more works that I will read and enjoy in the near future. Fighting!!!!

Writingonaphone

@FantasyFreak04 Heheh thank you so much for the support. Despite having imperfections at the earlier chapters I am happy to hear that you enjoy my work. I will try to improve myself and the coming chapters so that you'll enjoy them even more :3
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Star_Guardian98

Hi! there, I really, really love your work,..I'm so thrilled on what's gonna happen next chapter.... I will support you till the end

Writingonaphone

@Star_Guardian98 Thanks again Star Guardian for commenting :3 I've just finished Chap 100 it's now up for all to read XD
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Star_Guardian98

@Writingonaphone Thanks for new update now, I can't wait for more update that soon will come,...I do really love your work its so uniquekeep it up the good work!
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Writingonaphone

@Star_Guardian98 Thank you so much Star Guardian98 for your message. Now I feel more energized to improve my writing heheh, the next Chapter is 60-70% finished so it will be up soon enough :3
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