Alrightyyy
I got through the posted parts, and here’s what I got to say:
Ignore those crabapple people in your comments! Like actually, they got me annoyed now-
So dang rude, and for what?!
Here’s the fun part about being a writer, you don’t have to change or go by ANY guideline just because someone “told you so.”
If you’re happy with what you have, keep it!
I love to say “the people who comment the most are the most insecure writers who lack self confidence and ideas in their work.”
Keep it up! You got full support from the spellbound team ^^