Your boo has a nice pitch and the characters are good but the way your going on with the storyline is not captivating, almost as if its a loop. It wouldn't hurt to add a bit of humor to the book ad other activities outside Aanya's investigation, cryptic messages and all. I hope your not offended by my comment as I hold no malicious intent against you and I only want to give you some pointers on how to improve the book. Have a nice day and good luck on your book:)