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heyy i don’t really read Indian books but the name of the book got me interested and I’ve read around half the book and I must say the plot is really nice. It’s kind of a common plot but you are making it interesting with the politics and small details. Like you’ve got a very big potential to turn it into a masterpiece. I just want to share that I love Myra’s character and everything she does or says feels perfect and natural but Armaan’s character feels a bit creepy sometimes like climbing up to her hostel room or asking her to accept his obsession or barging into the changing room. His background is pretty good. It would be perfect if Armaan’s character also feels as calm and natural as Myra. Just a genuine suggestion and really appreciate your work. It’s nicely written