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The book is really awesome for your first time.
           I will also read your other books

Hey I was reading your Reborn: Revenge of The Second life. It had a interesting start, even though it had the same usual beginning as almost all the revenge & reborn stories, it had an interesting back story as there exists a past or childhood connection between the female lead and the one who kills her in the last life, a connection that will make him regret everything he has done until now. So all in all, the starting was interesting but you kind of ruined it by how her future turned out. A woman who was tortured, whose family was killed, and was finally burned alive by her husband and his family, she trusted the male lead too fast. The male lead offered her zero benefits through that contract, she can't even reveal the whole thing which makes it less beneficial. Her family is already 10 times richer than his, yet she needs a third person to take revenge. On top of all that, her father is shown to be a disappointing character, who does nothing against all the rumours against her and I don't even want to say anything about, it is so pathetic. He continuously breaks her first condition for the contract, yet she says nothing from the very beginning. 
          I know this is a free platform and you can write a story in any way you want. But being a constant user of wattpad, I thought I should let you know of the flaws. I know the story has already reached a point of no return. But please, the next time you write such a story make the character male/female more independent. Now there is no change in her at all. Being a person with a whole lot determination to revenge, all she does is make a cold expression. She is still too dependent, too weak, and too gullible.

Thanks for the update

Hi, I think your story has a good plot but to be honest, it went downhill. I'm not really concerned with writing reviews in wattpad since it's a free platform but I wanted to tell you that I appreciate your writing. It's hard to write a book and it's such a waste if it just goes like this. I hope you'll improve your writing to rewrite your books so that many people can see your hardwork and appreciate it. 
          

Hi guys! Been working on the next few chapters of Reborn: Revenge Of The Second Life!
          Thank you guys so much for the 50K views! And I’m also almost reaching 2K likes, I’d just like to thank all of you guys for your support, I hope you guys will continue to support me! I hope won’t disappoint u!!
          
          ❤️❤️❤️
          
          Also feel free to ask me any questions!

Hi is Reborn: revenge of the second life going to have a weak female lead because from what I’ve read so far so doesn’t seem to convince anyone that she’s strong enough to take any revenge. She is too weak. No offense I just wanted to know if she’s going to be like that through out the story.

Want to write here because I totally like your novel and your way of writing it have some mistakes but hit my heart and soul I find it interesting and you did a good job writing it . I like the story and I’m totally supporting you hope more improvement to see in the future. Your new fan reader 

Hey! This is just a little bit more about myself ^^
          
          I’m a girl yes, haha. I’m currently still schooling, going through exams and sh*t (whoops)  like that. I’m Singaporean, I’ve been living in Singapore, but Korea is like my second home too ^^. 네, 한국어 조금 할 수 있어요 (Yes, I can speak a little bit of Korean)
          
          I’ve always loved writing since I was a kid. I guess if you count back, I’ve written many many stories that I haven’t published maybe because I don’t have enough confidence in it haha. 
          
          These two books that I did published, Reborn: Revenge Of The Second Life and One hundred days with Mr devil is what I came up on the spot this year. Even though it has many flaws, I’m trying to improve it. Thank you all for helping and supporting me throughout, it has been a real encouragement because I never thought that people would want to read my stories. So thank you! Feel free to comment anything and vote if you enjoyed it! Don’t be a silent reader! Feel free to ask questions about the story too! I’ll answer them ^^