@AbstruseTAG Thank you for taking your time to promptly read and review the Prologue. I agree that it may use some rework, as well as some heavy editing so that it doesn't reveal everything from the very start. I planned to have it as an intro so that the reader knows what is happening and why. However, even I now can see that it is too much as it is - Maybe leaving just the part with Kayzuu, a bit about the gods, and the character leaving the village would have been the better thing to do.
Also, I do wish to know about these other stories that the one I write about is entering the bounds of. As much as I love anime and reading, and as much as I know that there are plenty of anime's based on gods, I also don't know exactly all of them, so I tried to push away from the ones I've already seen by a landslide. Perhaps you could tell me which ones so that I may do a bit of research and deviate away from those as well?
As for redundancy and all the mistakes made during the creation of the chapters - I plan on polishing, reworking and remaking each chapter as I move with more updates. You are right on one thing though - I should make chapters shorter, to around 700-1500 words, but it would also mean I'd have to post a bit more frequently. Perhaps preparing them in advance and simply cutting them into segments that would be posted every day or two would sound a bit better.
Lastly, I would like to thank you again. This time for offering your help, I really don't wish to waste any bit of your time, but I would love to have someone tell me if some part needs to be worked on, or if there is a mistake somewhere, however I cannot allow any editing by another hand. The reason being if I don't figure out the best way to write it down, then I won't progress any further, and I'll most likely repeat the same mistake.
