Hi! Read your story "Rearrange" it's a great plot and I'm wondering if your OC is a self-insert? Cause you make her relatable as a reader despite how she's an OC and I'm glad you didn't use any "yn" since it's already outdated and annoying to read. I just want to know what are her flaws in the story despite how I read the story and not finishing it(I'm a bit confuse of SI and OC), I also like how you make her a bit crazy cause it adds more theme to the story, the horror-monster esque. What I also love this story is it has logic mindset, other fanfics makes the character just agree to the oc answer without any hesitation or question. Despite how their world has curses and magic, you're still gonna be skeptical to the person who somehow knows the world and their backstory without meeting or knowing them in person. Also, is it alright if you give me some advice how you make the characters stay the same such as like character analysis ig(I really want to know your trick how you make the character stay the same despite how you're not a professional writer, I'm planning to write a story too and I'm still a beginner) oh— and I go by "Flxthrower" in AO3, I can recommend you some stories you want to read in the future for future ideas. Hope you update soon, stay well and have a balance life❤️
