Ophelia2019
Hey there!
I randomly remembered your story today while drinking my morning tea and realised how much I missed reading it! We last interacted for an FBE exchange.
You obviously must've had some reason for not returning to FBE, but I was wondering if you would be interested in continuing our exchange individually....
I would love to hear your thoughts on my book and read yours! Do let me know.
Love,
Ophelia
XaphRowan
@Ophelia2019 hi, sorry I'm on vacation for the next to weeks. I will not be available here much during that time. You can leave any comments, as long as it's genuine. If something is boring or confusing - I want to know especially. Be brutal :)
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Ophelia2019
@XaphRowan, I don't think you got notified of my reply, just tagging you so that you get a notification
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Ophelia2019
@Ophelia2019 you can give whatever feedback you feel like, praise, critique whatever it may be. There are obviously a lot of mistakes in the story as I haven't edited it yet, but I think overall the plot is mostly consistent. If you find any mistakes, you can tag and point it out without hesitation. Let me know what kind of feedback or comments you would appreciate...
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