XaphRowan

"Come writers and critics 
          	Who prophesize with your pen 
          	And keep your eyes wide 
          	The chance won't come again" <3

Ophelia2019

Hey there! 
          I randomly remembered your story today while drinking my morning tea and realised how much I missed reading it! We last interacted for an FBE exchange. 
          You obviously must've had some reason for not returning to FBE, but I was wondering if you would be interested in continuing our exchange individually....
          I would love to hear your thoughts on my book and read yours! Do let me know.
          Love, 
          Ophelia

XaphRowan

@Ophelia2019 hi, sorry I'm on vacation for the next to weeks. I will not be available here much during that time. You can leave any comments, as long as it's genuine. If something is boring or confusing - I want to know especially. Be brutal :)
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Ophelia2019

@XaphRowan, I don't think you got notified of my reply, just tagging you so that you get a notification 
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Ophelia2019

@Ophelia2019 you can give whatever feedback you feel like, praise, critique whatever it may be. There are obviously a lot of mistakes in the story as I haven't edited it yet, but I think overall the plot is mostly consistent. If you find any mistakes, you can tag and point it out without hesitation. Let me know what kind of feedback or comments you would appreciate...
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TaeTaeGinger

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rikaaraji468

@XaphRowan, hi! I see you've started putting up another story already. Was it an idea you've always had or it's one of those infestations that pop up when you're in the middle of writing another book?

XaphRowan

@rikaaraji468 Yeah, it's a kind of fantasy, rooted in Slavic folklore. Looking forward to reading your reactions :)
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rikaaraji468

@XaphRowan Must be exhilarating to finally put it down(or up). Looking forward to see how you take on the fantasy genre. Wait, is it fantasy?
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XaphRowan

@rikaaraji468 Hi, it's a story I wanted to write for a long time. It's been cooking up for a while and I've been doing some research recently to be able to write it properly. It's not done yet, but I already have a couple of chapters done. The first part will probably be in a novella format, but I'm already thinking of part 2.
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