MorganaWray

Hi xeamon, pls read my demon comic called malevolents

MorganaWray

@ChuckyIceheart thanks xeamon. Pls vote for my book
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Xeamon

@ChuckyIceheart 
            Your comic 'malevolent' was pretty good. But, with the demon acting like the woman's drowned child, you ahould have shown what happened with the child before the interaction with the demon. Either that, or make the woman have a flash back of the event.
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