So...
I came back to do more of the fanfic/rewrite I've been working on for so long and I have a few questions for those who are reading it.
Maybe it can be all globally made into one question:
Is it enjoyable?
Are the characters too mutilated from the original ones?
Is it being too slow and I'm focusing in a lot of little things that maybe seem to not matter at all?
Is the gender swapping a bit too much?
Is the adding of romantic feelings towards any direction forced and a bit too much as well?
I follow the original story without adding too much to make it slightly interesting?
Am I too slow uploading and it loses interest quickly?
Is my translation so crapy that you can't even start reading?
Please, those who read it, let me know.
Next thing, future plans:
-So far, the main objective is endind part 1 of Mata-Nui, ending as the Quest for The Mask end, after ""defeating"" Makuta for the first time and when the Bohrok attack.
The major changes into one part to another is going to be the time, being like a few weeks later so I can do what I'm gonna talk next.
-Extras short stories.
Even though I started with 2001's story, I want to re-make everything that occurred in that period of time in the official timeline. This including the three mini-short-story-thingys that they made.
But I don't want to stop there. I have a few ideas for more extra things:
-A bit more of Hahli's life in the village.
-Onepu and the Ussual races.
-Tahu and Kopaka beating the crap to each other 'cause Tahu is a pushover.
-More of Takua and Kiisu traveling.
So far I have that ideas.
Here's some questions: ¿is there too many? ¿are they even interesting ideas?
And even more, ¿any of you have any ideas for these type of things? There is no need to be in the Mata-Nui or involving someone from there while it happens at the same time.
Anyway, I'm eager to hear from you guys.
See ya in the next post.