i have an online friend who is also an amazing write that i really do look up to, no joke. he read my Enchanter book and gave me some tips to clean off my mess. I will be editing the Enchanter book and try new things out. I will annouce when all the mistakes have been cleaned since it's gonna be very different.
I hope you can read it again after i made it better, a big big thank you to my friend, without them i would have probably contiuedr writing in a very messy way.