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What would happen if a god in a manga or manhua or whatever was originally just an average guy, who had joint problems and suffered minor injuries, and as he got dragged into a system designed to make him stronger, all of his problems went away and he just kept getting stronger and stronger. His mortal life span was gone, and he had reached the heights of the gods, but there were still numerous gods more powerful then him. He's just a normal guy, who wants to play sports with his boys, basketball and soccer and such, but he can't do what he loves because he's physically too strong. His only competition are other gods, but the gkrs exist in an ecosystem of kill or be killed, and he's terrified of death. 
          	
          	He climbs and climbs the rankings until eventually, he can't climb any more, and he's once again average, but not average amongst billions of fellow humans who for the most part are friendly, but average amongst a few dozen blood thirst gods who want nothing more than to kill the strong to take their power, and make the weaker suffer. This existence is miserable, and I'd love to write a character like this someday, but my writing skills are chopped 

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@Xgaarasimp aint that fucking one punch man
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What would happen if a god in a manga or manhua or whatever was originally just an average guy, who had joint problems and suffered minor injuries, and as he got dragged into a system designed to make him stronger, all of his problems went away and he just kept getting stronger and stronger. His mortal life span was gone, and he had reached the heights of the gods, but there were still numerous gods more powerful then him. He's just a normal guy, who wants to play sports with his boys, basketball and soccer and such, but he can't do what he loves because he's physically too strong. His only competition are other gods, but the gkrs exist in an ecosystem of kill or be killed, and he's terrified of death. 
          
          He climbs and climbs the rankings until eventually, he can't climb any more, and he's once again average, but not average amongst billions of fellow humans who for the most part are friendly, but average amongst a few dozen blood thirst gods who want nothing more than to kill the strong to take their power, and make the weaker suffer. This existence is miserable, and I'd love to write a character like this someday, but my writing skills are chopped 

RenataLovesPierre

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@Xgaarasimp aint that fucking one punch man
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Nahhh xgaarasimp writing in 2025? Rewriting insane hero with more substance and more chapters coming soon

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I want to write a sociopathic character
          
          2 actually, 1 being the main antagonist and the other being a side character
          
          The antagonist is an asshole but the side character is just a helpful dude who wants to make peoples lives easier. An asshole sociopathic character in my opinion is one of the easiest characters to write in all of fiction, because in most cases, the big reveal or the big plot point with their character is that they aren't actually a sociopath, they learn emotions and feel, which is the opposite. 

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@SUBHUM4N_ thank you thank you, its truly a national holiday that should be celebrated world wide 
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One thing I think ANBU naruto stories get wrong is when they make him older. When you have a character age in your story, you have to understand, logically, how they would act. For example, I've been thinking of a ANBU naruto story where naruto is literally the chosen one. Created, not born, because God loved him so much. But his body can't handle all the power he has, so as a kid, he blows up ANBU kushina puts him in the ANBU to manage his powers. He's the oldest of 3, with a twin sister and a brother, and eventually later down the line, an adopted little sister. He's protective because he's strong. He's responsible becauses he's the first born, but he's still naruto, so he's reckless and does what he wants. 
          
          When you take a child like this and put him in the ANBU, fighting and killing, with friends and allies, and people he looks up to, having a good time, the weight of his actions isn't going to hit him until everybody from his Anbu is gone. He's going to have to mature later than his peers, but at a faster rate. He's going to want to quit and retire in his early 20s because a being this strong makes everyone else lazy, and he does too much work. He's going to be nostalgic and tell war stories because everybody he knew in his time, in his you know 15+ years of being in the ANBU, is dead or retired. At 25, he'll be 40, and at 40, he'll be your grandpa. 
          
          Its your character, but that doesn't mean you can do what you want with them, you wrote them a specific way, you have to know how this will effect them in the future

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One of my favorite things I've ever written is the Christmas special for New Team 10. I didn't know how i would write it considering the fact that new team 10, despite being published for i think 2 or 3 years at that point, barely had any actual content. So I took a different approach to it, instead of writing about their present, I wrote about their future, giving glimpses at what will happen in the story if I choose to continue it. I wrote it to near perfection, and while I wasn't able to include all the romance and familial aspects that I wanted because I was lazy, I dont think it sutracts from the chapter because it's all very concise and fits well. 
          
          But this year, I think we might just go ahead and continue the Christmas special. Focusing more on the relationships formed after the raid on toneri and Jigen, but you didn't hear that plot point from me. 

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I'm thinking now of a series of chapters, what for I'm not sure, but a series of chapters focusing on sacrifice. I caught up to critikal roll yesterday, the series, and I thought it was so interesting that I went and looked at scenes from the campaign and saw a really beautiful scene of sacrifice from Travis, the actor and player of scanlan.
          
          The way matt mercer portrayed the scene, and the way the characters reacted, knowing the real life implications, made me envision a story that's very up beat, a story that turns the OP character trope on its head. I said a few years back I wanted to write about the 5 stages of grief, and i think this would be the perfect way to implement it. With a character so strong, he breezes through all trials ahead of him, until he reaches an unbeatable opponent, and a member of his party has to make the greatest sacrifice. 
          
          The next chapter would be completely silent. There would be no dialog from the characters, only descriptions of the aftermath and their emotions, as well what it means to sacrifice, with the narrator giving a different interpretation depending on what character is being focused. With this character now gone, and the heros arrogance nowhere to be seen, he'd lose, and lose, and suffer more. Until finally finding his calling, his purpose he never got to partake in.