Xgaarasimp

One thing I think ANBU naruto stories get wrong is when they make him older. When you have a character age in your story, you have to understand, logically, how they would act. For example, I've been thinking of a ANBU naruto story where naruto is literally the chosen one. Created, not born, because God loved him so much. But his body can't handle all the power he has, so as a kid, he blows up ANBU kushina puts him in the ANBU to manage his powers. He's the oldest of 3, with a twin sister and a brother, and eventually later down the line, an adopted little sister. He's protective because he's strong. He's responsible becauses he's the first born, but he's still naruto, so he's reckless and does what he wants. 
          	
          	When you take a child like this and put him in the ANBU, fighting and killing, with friends and allies, and people he looks up to, having a good time, the weight of his actions isn't going to hit him until everybody from his Anbu is gone. He's going to have to mature later than his peers, but at a faster rate. He's going to want to quit and retire in his early 20s because a being this strong makes everyone else lazy, and he does too much work. He's going to be nostalgic and tell war stories because everybody he knew in his time, in his you know 15+ years of being in the ANBU, is dead or retired. At 25, he'll be 40, and at 40, he'll be your grandpa. 
          	
          	Its your character, but that doesn't mean you can do what you want with them, you wrote them a specific way, you have to know how this will effect them in the future

Xgaarasimp

One thing I think ANBU naruto stories get wrong is when they make him older. When you have a character age in your story, you have to understand, logically, how they would act. For example, I've been thinking of a ANBU naruto story where naruto is literally the chosen one. Created, not born, because God loved him so much. But his body can't handle all the power he has, so as a kid, he blows up ANBU kushina puts him in the ANBU to manage his powers. He's the oldest of 3, with a twin sister and a brother, and eventually later down the line, an adopted little sister. He's protective because he's strong. He's responsible becauses he's the first born, but he's still naruto, so he's reckless and does what he wants. 
          
          When you take a child like this and put him in the ANBU, fighting and killing, with friends and allies, and people he looks up to, having a good time, the weight of his actions isn't going to hit him until everybody from his Anbu is gone. He's going to have to mature later than his peers, but at a faster rate. He's going to want to quit and retire in his early 20s because a being this strong makes everyone else lazy, and he does too much work. He's going to be nostalgic and tell war stories because everybody he knew in his time, in his you know 15+ years of being in the ANBU, is dead or retired. At 25, he'll be 40, and at 40, he'll be your grandpa. 
          
          Its your character, but that doesn't mean you can do what you want with them, you wrote them a specific way, you have to know how this will effect them in the future

Xgaarasimp

One of my favorite things I've ever written is the Christmas special for New Team 10. I didn't know how i would write it considering the fact that new team 10, despite being published for i think 2 or 3 years at that point, barely had any actual content. So I took a different approach to it, instead of writing about their present, I wrote about their future, giving glimpses at what will happen in the story if I choose to continue it. I wrote it to near perfection, and while I wasn't able to include all the romance and familial aspects that I wanted because I was lazy, I dont think it sutracts from the chapter because it's all very concise and fits well. 
          
          But this year, I think we might just go ahead and continue the Christmas special. Focusing more on the relationships formed after the raid on toneri and Jigen, but you didn't hear that plot point from me. 

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I'm thinking now of a series of chapters, what for I'm not sure, but a series of chapters focusing on sacrifice. I caught up to critikal roll yesterday, the series, and I thought it was so interesting that I went and looked at scenes from the campaign and saw a really beautiful scene of sacrifice from Travis, the actor and player of scanlan.
          
          The way matt mercer portrayed the scene, and the way the characters reacted, knowing the real life implications, made me envision a story that's very up beat, a story that turns the OP character trope on its head. I said a few years back I wanted to write about the 5 stages of grief, and i think this would be the perfect way to implement it. With a character so strong, he breezes through all trials ahead of him, until he reaches an unbeatable opponent, and a member of his party has to make the greatest sacrifice. 
          
          The next chapter would be completely silent. There would be no dialog from the characters, only descriptions of the aftermath and their emotions, as well what it means to sacrifice, with the narrator giving a different interpretation depending on what character is being focused. With this character now gone, and the heros arrogance nowhere to be seen, he'd lose, and lose, and suffer more. Until finally finding his calling, his purpose he never got to partake in.

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Ladies and gentlemen, if I get a response to this post, I'll publish another chapter to any book of your request

Xgaarasimp

@Aaron5682 I'm trying to decide how to write the next chapter. I'm also waiting for the time, fall truly is the busiest time of year of a musician. Back to back to back to back home football games, concert, I've had a test every week and had to give a speech as well. for the first time in all my years, I am busy. And tired. And swamped with things to do. 
            
            Anyway this chapter is dedicated to you specifically, so I'll let you decide how the next chapter goes, initially, it was just going to follow the plot of gra_senseis naruto hatake, a copy paste with fixed grammar, but I'm thinking of diluting his . . . Masterpiece and writing something original for it. Should I?
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Attention followers 
          
          The best way to stay cool in the summer is to keep your balls cool, and I believe I've just found the most optimal position. Fan pointed directly at your balls looks weird, it's not natural and it won't retain the cool air, however, if you have a cover or blank, laying down, cover covering your balls and not much more, slightly going up your leg, there's an entrance on the side to your balls with no way out. You've essentially just created a cave that will retain both heat and cold air, but with the fan blowing into your hole, there is no heat and only cold air, and that's how you stay cool and stay fresh for your hoes. 

Xgaarasimp

Who am I? Can you not here the trumpets of Gabriel? You ask why god doesn't stop all wars? Simple. I don't feel like it.
          
          So go ahead and cry to your god, for I am not listening 

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To be honest God is making me forget about you……………………………..……………………
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
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