i had a writing burst yesterday, so your, uh well, *cough* 87 words long chapter 2 became 443 words and counting, and its starting to look much longer than cahpter 1
considering this, when i DO pick up the book again, i may rewrite chapter 1 (again) but yet again, chapter 1 looks completely fine and i do not want to poke it with a stick everyone calls a pencil