There are some spelling errors that I've noticed, but I really like the story so far! It's really great so far and I can't wait to hear more about everyone's backstories and maybe even see a few new characters. (I'm also expecting some juicy plot twists!) Even though you say that you're not good at writing stories, everyone has their different writing styles, and I really like yours! And even if I don't really like o2l that much, I'll definitely support you on this! (btw if you didn't get that already, its Halle)
