Your chapters good but tell me in future will you update chapter in every 10 days I asked that because there was same difference between chapter 1 and 2
@MichaelUrge7 Pretty good! Aside from minor errors that can be overlooked, the reactions to it are pretty nice. I can nitpick on some stuff, but those would just be personal issues. I can tell a lof of effort has been put in it, so keep going. :)