MichaelUrge7

Heyo, thank you for reading my story!! Could you please give me your review about it?

MichaelUrge7

@Xotuse Thank you for the response. Though I am curious about your personal issues with the story. I want to improve the best way I can!
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Xotuse

@MichaelUrge7 Pretty good! Aside from minor errors that can be overlooked, the reactions to it are pretty nice. I can nitpick on some stuff, but those would just be personal issues. I can tell a lof of effort has been put in it, so keep going. :)
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